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I cannot believe I just watched a video of someone driving a train. I assume this is partially influenced to that 2 train movie Незначительные подробности случайного эпизода but it just was nonsense. I would say the navigation controls were nice looking and I enjoyed the one with the blonde girl and put her head out the window which was beautifully done. granted I had no idea what was going on most of the time and I kind a lowered the green one the grid was just sticking her behind up on the floor in the train. come on, I know you can do better than this.

ok I checked the lyrics and I can see that this is likely heavily based on lyrics which is cool but some concepts just do not have to be done. maybe if it was more stylistically with transitions I could understand but this does not have enough transitions to fit the smooth action oriented little plot video either.

I was gonna give it a 3 but I promoted the score of because of how good you did (though I am not familiar with the series) but the old man in the office which I assume was the father. (I mean it could have been a professor, I hope I am not getting this that off) And how are you invoked emotion in those scenes promoted it to a 4. The biggest problem is the video game portion in the beginning was difficult to attach to the second half of the video.

this is a very social media influenced video. I do not mean like it watches like a TikTok,I mean I got that social media attitude. you got that feeling through it very well and you will go far in that vein. you also did a good job combining the many girl genre with that attitude has been a clever combination.

The ending One and a half minutes was great. problem is it took way too long to pick up and I do not mean a slow first verse, I mean for almost half of the video. it relied too much on someone's hand going to the sky. it is fine to repeat a scene but you made it too much of a focus.

I love this but is there any place to find the lyrics.

I enjoy this, I will say one watching they were a few sloppy bits but it has a lot of promise. I enjoyed the concept just remember that these style videos are very heavily rated on transitions. I wish you the best on your future endeavours.

okhostok написал(а):
Well, the track is good, but the structure in this video is weak. The video 80% consists of various facial expressions of characters. It would not have been problem if it had some structure like sad faces in beginning, some action in the middle and happy faces in the end, but everything here is pretty mixed.
Nevertheless, good 80's vibe/aesthetics, interesting track. Good luck.

I do you think the facial expressions were done well in this.

you did a great job combining the character moments of Sailor Moon with the style of the Charmed opening. As cool as it would have been to see some of the other standard scouts I understand the choice you made in choosing only the first three and the Japanese opening did even only had the first three walking in their early openings. (even if the other sailors appeared elsewhere in that opening) Great job.

you did a great job here.

I kind of thought I was going to get included in the contest. they are more specific about deadlines then they used to be.(considering they do not even get a time zone for the main portion, I always stayed in the wheelhouse) but I guess I stretched it A few hours longer than I should have. (there was no time or announcement that the thing closed down when I posted but it is what it is) I just wanna update since I mentioned this in the note and say my father is now back, hopefully he stays healthy.

SWS написал(а):
Не зря в данном клипе указана студия Global Shadow Studios. Всё показанное глобально и, по настоящему, тенево! А сцену на 00,45 можно даже ставить в логотип. Надпись на клинке в начальных кадрах, тоже кстати, ничё так. Правда прочитать я её не смог. То ли из за недостатка внимания то ли из за того что выезжает она со стороны отнюдь не способствующей её прочтению. Акын спорный. То что он есть не беда. Но, как я уже и отметил выше, он довольно своеобразный. Например на фразе "Мы оба" показана не пара, а две. Возможно конечно это и параллель на параллельную историю но мои внутренние параллели привели куда то в Швецию. И отнюдь не к шветскому столу а к другой, не менее известной особенности, шветского домоустройства. (Хотя, возможно, я слишком испорчен для разных таких AMV просмотром разных всяких не AMV. Кто знает...) Задумка с крупными планами весьма удачна. И это без шуток. Только, местами, мелькают они очень быстро. Вероятно, если вместо смены сцен, использовать наезд/отъезд камеры то смотрелось бы более выигрышно. В целом песня сильная. Исходники олдскульные. Но приводить в общему знаменателю (16/9 или 4/3 там) все таки желательно. И полосы по краям тоже желательно убирать. Иначе клип смотрится уж больно неопрятным. А в целом. На удивление - понравившаяся работа с кона.

if you meant the green text, I add a source the last second, by that point I already made the credits on PowerPoint and did not want to try and make a photo of the slide since the attempt was to get it in there and maybe still have this count, so I basically just insert it in the program. usually I would move the picture but it was already on the slides so I had to just change the color which is why it is as sloppy as it is. I think what really cost me was that I had to wait 45 seconds for each speed change at the end. this led me to basically not begin versus end until 5 am we are realistically it should have been done by 3 to 4am. I think I improvise pretty well but I have a new version to try out but I wanted to finish this first since there was less than a month left. I think they said they got rid of the autosave wait time so hopefully this makes things better.

terms of the 'both of them', I meant friendship or understanding (with assisting each other overtone) when they are supposed to be(and usually are in the field) against each other. this is just supposed to be the twisted world of broken alliances and forged ones on a business and personal level so they could beat the "the final battle" (with purple hair character) spy thriller style. granted I did try to take this seriously with the more 'gritty' take. (which in this case basically means not placating the effects of war) the biggest issue was things were really crammed by the end. granted everything before the last verse definitely was thought out. (and that scene was the only 'random scene') but I had the delete stuff figured out the only thing is I could not find the spread out computer with a large document scene so I have to be not included. but I cannot remove that for us because it's tied everything together.

I will mention that in terms of the 4.3 weirdly enough that source is newer. I still do not understand why a 2001 source is 16.9 which is the main issue with balancing these out is Noir is 90s/early 2000s animation done in a 2010 ratio. thanks for enjoying my video, I take great appreciation reading your comment.

this is great amazing,you got the mood, everything correct. 5

this is perfect it did not skip a beat, it is purely action and it works somehow. usually all of these elements would seem tacky particularly the talking cat but you got the concept of work which is amazing amazing accomplishment on its own. this one was fun to watch and for that I give you a 5.

Great job

your style is so cool. you somehow made everything work together.

you got the talent very well.

you know I never stop watching a video midway when I am going to rating it, this one is exception, granted I came to my better judgment distraught skipping around so I really have some idea of what after 52 seconds had. granted some of the issues is obviously I am not one of the manly men that this is dedicated for. but ignoring even all of that which I am since that does not belong in grading a video there is some serious flow problems in which there is not enough movement and some of the scenes and some of them are pretty much static. I can guess that it is from the source but other than the nude scenes and the woman scenes which were done pretty well and the punch a shark scene which I loved there needs to be more movement and a bigger assortment if you looking to win the top score. I have seen some of your other work, I know you could do better.